Yearbook - development

I have chosen the two designs that i like and from there i have mocked them up, looking at new grid formats and the positioning of images.
Because they are looking for a more look-book style of design then i think its important to give a lot of space for images and freedom to layout the most important images.
However i have formed a structure for the text, as well as a the vectors that help illustrate the
narrative.

// LAYOUT 1

// LAYOUT 2

I think that from both i like the layout of the text from the 2nd and the vectors of the first. When speaking to the Printed textiles team i remember them saying that they liked the layout of the text that was on our proposal boards. So that is why i think it is important to incorporate this into the text.

I am going to bring both together and develop them as one instead or separately.