Under Milk wood

I have tried again with the Under Milk wood text, theres a lot less body copy so it's given me more room with the size of the type and the way that it works. I think that it actually works better. If i can establish a trend in this poster then i can apply the same format to the structure of the next poster regardless of the amount of body copy.

These are some absic attempts at overlaying the quotes. They need a lot of work, and im not sure the bestw ay to achieve it so im going to ahve to do a lot of experimenting to get it wrong.